Changes to Storyboard

The first change we made was to take out one shot of the couple and Katie after the close up of Sophie as it ruined the mystery of our teaser trailer as we didnt want the audience to know straight away that all three characters were linked - this was more suited to a full length trailer.

We also added short flashing images in between shots as it added tension and mystery. Without the flashing images out trailer was too slow and simple. It wasnt interesting to an audience.

We originally planned to have a close up shot of an eye towards the end of our trailer, however we thought this shot was effective that we used it repeatitivly throughout the trailer establish out storyline better and represent the unstable emotion of the main character. We also felt that it looked lost on its own so wanted to combine it with other shots.

In general, we had to re-arrange the ordering of the shots so that the trailer made more sense.